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Friday, November 12, 2010

Elizabette's

This is a break from my usual type of post. I was stuck in a traffic jam yesterday, and my mind sort of just wandered, and this is where it went. It's very clear in my mind - I don't know if I am a skilled enough writer to draw the picture this deserves in your head...but I hope so. I would love your feedback on this.


The very first time I went to Savannah was in 1989 to visit my best friend. She had moved there after school, accepting a minuscule salary, no benefits or job security for the chance to work in her chosen career. We went to River Street, the gem of that lady of the south, and walked for hours on cobblestone streets meandering under old oak trees. We talked as if our very lives depended on getting everything said in that one very short night...It was January, and it was cold. Realizing we were hungry, we searched for a restaurant or pub, but time had wisped away under cover of our happy voices, and so the only place open was the big hotel on the river. Practically schoolgirls still, we were hardly dressed for dinner at the Hyatt, but in we strolled, graciously accepting the small table squished near the kitchen door. We paused our conversation long enough to look at the menus, and realized in an instant that we were out of our league...between the two of us, we had about enough money for a bowl of soup, and that was only if we had enough guts to not leave a tip for the waiter. So, out we went, back up to the river, not really distressed at our situation. After all, we had survived many nights of insufficient funds, back at school. We found another open door; down a half set of stairs, set into the basement of one of the big tourist places. We walked in to a blast of heat, and music - the jazz being played by the musicians on the tiny stage was the kind that sets every hair bristling...the kind of music girls like us had only heard in the movies we had snuck in to see. A very fat woman eased herself off a stool in the corner and approached us. We asked in timid voices if they served food there, and if we were too late to order something to eat. The fat lady didn't say much, but she sort of nodded, and slid an arm around each of us, and shepherded us to a table, right in front of the piano. The musicians looked at us briefly, without interest. A man in shiny pants brought us some coffee - unasked for, but very much appreciated because we were both feeling cold. We sipped our coffee, pungent with some unknown liquor, and assessed our surroundings. We were in a very nice place. Remembering the Hyatt, we began to get a little nervous, but no one had even brought us a menu yet. We figured we would have enough for at least the two coffees, if we couldn't afford to eat. The band played, the few other customers - women in elegant dresses, the men in suits with narrow colorful ties- danced in the small clearing near the stage. We listened and watched, silenced by the warmth, the coffee, the music, the comfort we had found in this little place. After a half hour or so, we had still not been brought menus, but the fat lady appeared at the table with two plates, mounded high with delicious smelling food. We looked at one another; my friend and I worried we wouldn't be able to pay. We started to ask how much for the dinner, but she shushed us and put a plate in front of each of us, and waited for us to start eating. It was meatloaf, hot and tangy and ambrosial with mashed potatoes that were salty and somehow sweet at the same time. Gravy floated on everything, except for the fresh strawberries and grapes that were nestled next to the pile of meatloaf. It tasted as delicious as it smelled and we ate it all. Warm, a bit tired now, but with full bellies, we enjoyed the rest of the band's final set. The fat lady once again came up to our table. She said that she was ready to close up, and asked if we had come by car or did she need to call us a taxicab to get home. We looked at her blankly, and my friend told her that we had walked there from her apartment on Whitaker Street. The woman sighed and shook her head; " You can't walk all that way now. It's 2 o'clock in the morning. I'll call a car for you." We were worried - we hadn't thought of getting back to the apartment, and we still hadn't paid for dinner. We asked how much we owed her for the dinner and coffee, and she surprised us by asking "Well, how much do you have?" "8 dollars", I said. She smiled and said that would be just about right. We handed her the 8 dollars but she took only two. "You'll need the rest for your cab ride home." She shooed us out the door and waited with us in the cold until we were ensconced in a battered taxi. She stood and watched as we were driven away, the old car bouncing heavily on the rutted road.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

maybe you should stick to the funny stuff!

Teresa Creel said...

I loved this, Penny! Savannah is one of my favorite places and this story is just one example of why I love my home so much. I've always been one to appreciate other, different places and people, but you know the old saying: There's no place like home. Here in the South, there are still people who are willing to take you under their wing and make sure you're all right, no matter what your or their color or race is, and I hope it will always be that way!

Penny said...

Anonymous, thank you for your feedback. I hope you enjoy my next post more than this one!

Penny said...

Teresa, thank you so much for your feedback. It makes me really happy that you "got it". The rest of the world could take a lesson from Savannah. Thanks for reading.

Boots O'Rourke said...

I was buoyed up by the feel and taste and humanity of it.

Penny said...

Boots, thank you so much for your comment- it brought tears to my eyes. I am so happy that you "got it", too.